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Texture has been discussed. I will not say a thing about it. You really, really, really, really, really, really, really need to take some time, and sit down, and look at string pieces written by string players. Not a Mahler symphony, nor a schumann symphony... but something by someone who writes well for strings... And you need to do what they do. Your articulations, phrase and slur markings, and use of the instruments are just... off.