The music is kindling. Stirs up a certain feeling within me. But the middle part, seems very rock-ish, and sounds very modern in fact. I'm very curious how you came up with this kind of combination. You seem very knowledgeable in using the drums, but you're too sporadic with them... if you're going to have a drum section, you should do it more. In addition, you could fill out some parts more... especially the piano sections, adding strings and a bass would help in creating more of a fuller atmosphere.
I'm really honest with my words so please forgive me if I don't offer as much praise as other people do. I only give my first unfiltered impression, and hopefully it will encourage you rather than the opposite.