A little too heavy with the sitar or synth at 0:07-0:19. You might have to turn it down. If you're putting some reverb on it, that might have to go down as well.
It definitely has a computer, action game feel to it. It also has a nice retro sound to it. I'm not entirely sold on the string line at 1:00. It sounds like you could have resolved it to a better chord.
Not bad. Pretty cool in fact. Just clean up the mud at 0:07 and you'll be laughing :lol:
Btw, what did you use to compose this?
-John