Hi Isaias,
Normally I don't comment on the work of folks who haven't commented much for others, but as I listened I figured I ought to give you some brief thoughts.
The entire mix is very quiet and flat...I was hoping for some more dynamic range and a bit more breadth to the sound. The writing sounds basically like trailer music, and since this is a trailer I suppose that's appropriate. I wasn't feeling the Harry Potter vibe, to be perfectly honest with you. A franchise like that demands a fairly creative and thematically rich treatment and thus far the series hasn't really gotten it since the original Williams scores and a few tracks from the sequels. The best I've heard has easily come from James Hannigan's scores for the most recent two games.
, for instance. Those scores really say Harry Potter to me. This says trailer.That aside, it was nice to listen to. With some tightening up of the messy rhythmic changes and some work on making the mix a bit grander, you'll have a great trailer cue on your hands here. If you've got the time to put new tracks up here though then you can drop a comment or two on other folks' work while you wait for the upload to finish...it will help get you more comments and people will know that you're a helpful sort of person for the next time you upload something.