Hey Miggy! I checked out your choral piece as promised.
I enjoyed it a lot! It had a really warm, happy, prideful type of atmosphere. Very nice.
Now, I haven't read any of the others' replies so as not to taint my opinion; so here is what I think if you're looking for a bit of criticism or suggestions.
Firstly, as I heard the opening, I really enjoyed the melody and such, but it felt... odd. I couldn't put my tongue on it. And then it hit me! Here's an idea I thought you could try. I felt like the beginning opened too boldly and fast paced, like march-like. To change this, maybe, from measures 1 through 5 (up through "sky:") make the tempo sort of... 'Freely'. Like, quarter note = low 50s, possibly even 60. So it's like a free, expressive opening figure. Sort of like a cadenza I suppose. And then they hold out this beautiful "Sky!", and then break out into the central story and melody of "So it was when my life began". Ya know what I'm saying? Just a suggestion, just my opinion, you don't have to. :)
Next, measure 14. I think the rhythm is awkward with the words. If it were me, this is exactly what I would do. Make "it" a dotted quarter note, put "when" on the 'and' of beat 4, and make "I shall" two eighth notes on the downbeat of measure 15. I think it'd sound less awkward.
Speaking of measure 15, in my personal opinion, I think the altos should resolve from C to B with the tenors. Just sayin'. Again, you don't have to.
Lastly, in the last four measures, I have a tiny suggestion. In measure 34, "natural" has the option of being three syllables; as in, na-tu-ral. Maybe make beat 1 two eighth notes (maintaining the same pitches) instead of a quarter? I dunno, that's just what I think.
Again! These are all just my opinions; I'm no professional. Heck I'm not even out of high school, I haven't taken any composition anythings. My suggestions are just based on instinct; take 'em or throw 'em out. :)
Nice work! I'd like to see more! Cheers!
-Keegan