Though not to my immediate taste either, I found this piece compelling, even in an electronic rendering - and not merely because it's for viola.
I wish I knew better how to express it, but I found myself drawn in by it within a few measures, without even really understanding what it was saying because it wasn't speaking a music language in which I am fluent. It ended up being a calming, meditative experience for me.
Perfect length I think, and even though I don't understand it, I have to commend you for the way you presented and developed the material because it spoke to me anyway. I found it consistently mesmerising. I don't know if that's the kind of reaction you were looking for, but that's the effect it had on me.
Very nice work. I find myself wanting to play it, too!