HELLO :D
THIS PIECE IS AN INTERESTING MIX OF SOUNDS TOGETHER :D
I LIKE HOW YOU FUSE THEM TOGETHER USING THE NICE NICE NICE LYDIAN MODE :D
although it sounds modern and honestly i ain't a fan of modern music, but i like the way you arrange them in the particular order at the beginning. :) and how they seem to merge together nice-ly and not entirely randomly. :D
AND,maybe u can add more melody lines here and there too :D
haha i don't know anything about the hemiola thingy lol :D Im someone who's weak in theory :P
AND!!!
I LIKE YOUR RHYTHM. VERY JUMPY. AND LIVELY. AND HAPPY.
P.S Pardon my poor music critique skills. :P
-CJJJJJJJJ HAAHAHA