I don't think that many of us here consider ourselves 'experts'. Most of us are students trying to learn from one another - giving critical feedback about whatever we observe might be wrong or could be improved in our forum-friends' works.
And I leave it to you to decide what you need to do. But be critical of yourself, as most of us are of ourselves. It's the essence of learning.
´Sonata form, thanks for this competition and opportunity.
I will participate! I've already choosed the theme, I just want to ask, it has 20 bars, but it is in 2/4, is it a problem?
Thank you!