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I'd tread the middle road here. It's good if you're just starting out. This isn't as bad a start as many people have who try to compose. But at the same time, it would be really unhealthy if you were satisfied with this for long. It doesn't sound ugly or displeasing to the ear at all. The idea, as far as it goes, is a nice one. However, as Sojar said, it is rather cliche. And of course all my music was too when I started out. I'd say my music still isn't all that inventive or special. I think it just takes time to develop an individual voice and shake off the bad habit of clinging to the same tired old ideas you hear elsewhere. Slowly but surely I'm getting better at it, and I guess what I'm trying to say is that you will too if you don't let yourself be content to write cheesy pop melodies for the rest of your life. Good luck and sorry/not sorry if this isn't quite what you wanted to hear. I really do mean well, and I'm sure Sojar did too even if it wasn't clear from how he communicated his thoughts.