This is kind of a piece I had written before knowing much about theory, but knew enough about composition and form to formulate a coherent piece. It didn't help me get into Oberlin so I'd love to hear why from you!
I'm with Luis for most of what I thought. Some of the left hand inversions maybe could have been spaced out a little more to avoid it sounding murky, but this was pretty rare. Overall, nice work
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In several parts it sounds like an harp (or its equivalent in eastern music). I like your work in the highest notes. Sometimes it sounds "chinese", other times not so much. I think it colud depend on using the pentatonic scale or not. Anyway, interesting. i always like alternative harmonies.