Hi luderart,
In an attempt to focus more on the site and innovations, I'm going to suspend the writing challenge.
However, I will keep my promise and review this piece as well as post a recording of it later for you.
It's a very nice sounding piece, but quite safe. It all stays within the confines of a pretty lower range and doesn't develop into the higher up. Which would be fine, I just would have liked something a little more complex if it were to stay in that range as a sort of rhythmic or timbral development.
On the whole, bowing use is pretty good with nice jumps and tonal fluidity.
I'll have something for you in the next week or so, hopefully.