Thanks for your comments, Fellas. I’m glad you liked the work. Luis, it is an elegy, as you say. The chordal gestures represent a cry or a sob or a sigh, something that can happen in a single human breath. And right again, it is a piece where dissonances figure prominently. Because grief is a strange thing and a tear is oddly satisfying in its catharsis, though on the whole, crying is a profoundly painful thing. I felt that the gestures should contain elements of each, consonance and dissonance, both of equal value.
Mark, it sounds like you would have preferred proper phrases and more continuity instead of the gesture approach which is more episodic. That's a good point.