Very dramatic, I love it.
At M38, the piano phrases on the right hand don't properly accompany the singers descending phrases. Choosing more deliberate spots with the those runs allow the singer to sink into the style change starting at M33.
M47, the word "warriors" doesn't roll from the mouth easily. "Wawr-ee-er" is particularly difficult to end the 8th tied Half on because the word doesn't end on a consonant and contains two vowels clashing to form a clear dipthong, ee-er. I.E. you started M33 with the word swords. "Sohrd" is a word that both ends on a consonant and extends only one vowel.
Thanks.