Hi Maarten, thank you so much, I'm so glad that changes are noticeable and that they're an improvement on the original. That opening 4 note motif is meant to be a little minimalist, but I worried that it got boring quite quickly. I didn't want to over develop it though, at least until later in the piece, so I added the clarinet to give it a bit more meat lol.
I'm very pleased also that you find the melodies appealing. I think I would have to say that melody is very important to me and finding a good melody is not easy (at least for me) lol.
Of course I would love to have it performed, but it is written now, and so who knows, in years to come, I might find a group interested enough to perform some of my pieces, but for now, I am content that it at least exists, and what may come, may come.
Thanks again for your kind words, and the good news is that now I have this thing done (more or less), I have time to start thinking about the saxophone piece for you.
Kind regards
Mark