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@Maarten Bauer thanks so much for your review! Yes you are right...there are many spots where melody does not meet harmony perfectly...my fault. I should take some time to revise this kind of things before asking for advices...And next time I will... Also thanks for the good things you said about the piece! They're not soundfonts...I produced the piece using Cubase and vst instruments...piano in particulare is addictive keys. What I have learned from you review is to better revise my pieces

I just want to say looking through the materials (I'm not a judge anymore) that your photography is wonderful! I wish I had that eye and steady hand.

It's not quite like Glass, but that's okay, because this is still really, really good! I liked this piece a lot. Lots of cool turns with the ostinato somehow never really getting boring because you switch up the orchestration so much to accommodate. I think some of the bigger sections seem like you're stretching for ways to twist the feeling a little too much in spite of this fact, and that's why it sounds so different than the rest of the piece. The ending also could be extended a little bit. But that's a lot of nitpicking. The Db major was such a wonderful moment, as was the steady build using nonfunctional harmony. Great work, really.

@MusicianXX12 You are defintely right...using a different movement in left hand would have given a new "light" to the new section...I'll use this technique in my future compositions...thanks for your useful advices!

It starts minimal, and in the middle becomes cinematic, turning back to the first idea, and so on.... I like it, indeed, it develops many colorful combinations.