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  1. The chromatic ending in your first runs up I found a little bit out of character. You could have also used a couple more borrowed tones to build up more intensity. I found the whole thing's arc more like that of a final level before the boss, actually. Boss themes I feel are more memorable and either high energy or intentionally drawling. This wasn't really either of those. That being said, good job on the whole.
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  2. Hi! My name is Peter Crow, I'm a film/ game composer from the Netherlands. I made this track and I would like to hear your thoughts on it. it's going to be used in a game for the itch.io game jam 2017. (if its good enough and if it fits the game of course. I haven't gotten a lot of information on the game but that didn't stop me! since the topic is "dreams" I thought it could fit.) it's just a (very) rough sketch of two themes. the topic for the game jam is "dreams". I haven't gotten to any mixing or mastering yet. these are just the melodies. Please take into consideration that this is game music. so it's mostly in the background.
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  3. Hi all, my first upload on here. So, my friend came to me one day, having known that I liked to write and asked me to put something to some old footage she had of her grandparents. It took me a while to be happy with the outcome but eventually I got there. My background is classical from a young age although the last few years my knowledge seems to be failing me, as I don’t concentrate too much on what is right and what is wrong when it comes to the theory of writing. I play around until I hit on something I like. Let me know what you think 😬
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  4. The themes are clearly defined and can be heard clearly. In Forest, I felt like the bass was too loud. And in Boss, I felt like it ended too soon.
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  5. The articulations on some of your notes seem a little off (staccatos). The mixing on the melody is also a bit weird. The chords should probably change a little bit, though when you do modulate or use a borrowed chord it's well done. The 7-8 retardation in your melody line is also a little off putting too. I agree with ilv's comment about the musical setting.
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