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https://musescore.com/user/12518851/scores/4742266 The first movement is in the other uploaded works (called "Forewarning"). All feedback is appreciated!

A short piece for solo piano, basically a variation of the same theme in 2 parts, separated by the change of dynamics.

Nice! I hear some promise in here. The sounds you're using are nice and fairly well balanced. Your changes and "impact" moments are well spaced and have the right idea, but feel a little underwhelming to me in terms of progression. It feels like I want a bigger difference from what I'm hearing before the transition to what I'm hearing after the transition. Not sure if I want more of a dynamic difference or compositional difference, but that's what my ear tells me. Good sounds, well thought out, but a little reserved. Keep it up :) Gustav Johnson

The loneliness is evident. This is because you use a simple 'lonely' melody in the beginning. You kept the harmony very simple too, which is very smart. For me the composition is not finished yet. Maybe you could extend the piece in a way that you make the loneliness even more clear. Perhaps you can use a theme that has a very dense harmony, which can make the contrast to your loneliness very big. Nice piece though!