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thanks very much for criticism! y really appreciate your words! and yes iam novice composer.. :/ the cohecion is hard for me now...

There are some interesting elements to this, though I must say as a whole the track seems to lack a lot of cohesion. The melodies also don't feel very 'organic' is the only word I can think to use. I do quite like the over-all tone of the section around the 3:00 mark onward. (though it does feel like a build up to a 'climactic' section that doesn't arrive) I think perhaps practising with some shorter tracks/ideas with less sections along the way could be worth looking into as several minute compositions with lots of sections and changes can be very challenging to keep cohesive, especially when you're just starting out. It's clear that there is a passionate composer within you so keep at it and keep practising!

Ah you did 'm on purpose. I was already wondering how they came to be as those are the only moments that are 'inharmonic' so to say. It would strike me as odd that such a well crafted musical composition would have two unnoticed mistakes in 'm. I see where you're coming from to create something interesting within the layers. They didn't sit well with me as I listened because the whole piece was harmonically 'correct' and they just seemed like small mistakes. Maybe if you emphasized the moment and the resolution of it, it wouldn't have struck me as odd. As said before, overall very nicely crafted. Lot of talent.