Nice music.
The structure is a strong point, I think. Vertical structure (chords and parallel lines) predominate, which is normal when one is in the beginning. I mean, counterpoint is always welcome.
The initial motif and its variants is interesting.The thick chords that appear several times (as in 1:30) are good and very contemporary. The ascending progression from 1:38 to 1:50 is the part I like less (is predictable). The ending is, perhapt, too classic for a work like this, which sounds modern.