This is a more aggressive song than your others. In that I mean several of the instruments, 'demand' your attention. In one way a bit overwhelming. Still considering the song, and your attnention I get what you are trying to do... Maybe subdue a part or two, or a section of it. As evidenced by your previous uploads, you do have quite a knack for embedding hooks into every instrument.. and wow, I'm still very impressed with your voice. A perfect rock voice. Clarity, phrasing, tonality, and your control (did you study vocals or just your own learning from doing).
High quality.. thanx