I don't know who 'he' is.. But I hope he's far away from me.. Seriously, it's good.. Has a frantic, very bold quality to it. You show imagination, and the ability to move into another motif pretty well. My particular observations. too much gong. most of the sounds are 'blaring'.. (a distortion).. Almost all the sounds have a 'in your face attitude'. I would guess, these are the patches, libraries themselves. Not that you are technically overloading a sound. The fuzziness of the piece kind of overwhelms me.
I know absolutely know thing about 'epic gaming music'.. so you could be perfectly right on with this. I perhaps would use some cleaner strings and horns to counter balance the 'in your face sounds' You might consider some dynamics. Once this piece gets going it' like a runaway train.. (again perhaps perfect for a video game sequence).
I liked the ending. You have great ideas. Keep 'em coming..