Hi, Tanju!
The opening crescendo is stirring (love the big brass chords!), but perhaps there are one too many repeats of that.
The middle "Lord of the Rings" section with the solo cello is quite soulful. I like how you brought back the beginning chords but with some arpeggiated stringwork—nice!
Oh, and then the choir comes in (no idea what they're singing, but it sounds epic)... creates a nice build! You bring the brass back in a little too loudly, I'm afraid; drowns out the choir around 3:30. The crescendo around 4:00 is pretty epic, but the cutoff at 4:30 is even more epic. (And, honestly, it's kind of relieving... not sure how much more build my ears could take.)
The section from around 4:45 to 6:30 is loud and dramatic, but I'd already heard it once before, so its effect is a little stunted.
The dénouement to the end with the soloist, choir and quiet strings is welcome after such an intense onslaught of crashing cymbals and blaring brass.
My overall impression of this work: nicely done! It followed a timeless story arc, and, as such, was enjoyable to hear. As far as good epic film music goes, this meets all the criteria (in my opinion). Plus, the sound library you're using is very realistic—makes it much easier to listen to than a MIDI rendering. I think that's a good thing! My only critique (without seeing the score) is that it's virtually indistinguishable from other epic music filmscores. Not necessarily a dealbreaker, but perhaps something to work on personally as a composer.
Keep up the good work!
Cheers,
Tónskáld