To practice folkloristic melody, simple harmony and counterpoint:
Short score: https://www.dropbox.com/s/5s2t7b8njxmqxzi/OTL2.png?dl=0
Mock-up: https://www.dropbox.com/s/bclttrp1ol6t0wr/OTL2.wav?dl=0
It's fine... it just kind of sounds like a splash of color that obscures some of the more intricate compound melody present in the original with overlap.
Thank you so much for your feedback Gustav! 🙂 I agree with you, I was afraid to change the atmosphere too much and kept the beat and harmonic rhythm too constant throughout the piece, but, as you commented, the piece would clearly benefit from some unexpected changes on the harmonic rhythm.
Thank you so much for listening and reviewing!!
This is a good music! You don't need to write more elaborate works so to speak, just look at Philip Glass for example. I like this piece I think it has interesting ideas and I would like to hear more! Keep going