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Thank you !

For example in the minute 1:49 change that structure a little bit. Later you repeat it.

Very good ideas and creativity, but for me the piece sounds rushed and at some other points it sounds repetitive. It is okay, the use of consonance-dissonance is pretty nice and your melodies aren't too predictable (which I believe is good) like something I could compose.

Wow! This is so beautiful! I've listened to it a few times and I keep coming back to it. It's incredibly sad, I think the most poignant music is cheerful on the surface but slowed down to create a feeling of longing. The slow movement of mozarts Eine Kleine Nacht Musik does this well. The final cadence without the third creates a hollow sound and has a renaissance feel to it. I think the piece doesn't necessarily need the trio and feels complete enough for me. I'd like to hear more of your music it's more impressive to me than the more showy pieces I'm hearing lately that make me think of a boy playing with his dads shaving creme. Mozart wrote tons of minuets and simple pieces before attempting faster and more challenging music. I much prefer well written simple music to poorly executed flashy pieces that sound like bootleg fireworks.

Lovely movement! Yes, I can hear Mozart's print there...no wonder after the 27 exeptional Piano Concerti he left 🙂