Thanks you Mike, I'm glad you liked it, I do appreciate it.
PaperComposer,
Thanks a lot for you comments, I appreciate it. I do feel there is some variety lacking in the piano developments and the cadenza could be longer as you say, take in more of the developments. Also I want to change the recapitulation a little, but I got it to a stage where I think the bones are good, and I never stop tinkering with these things, so by the time the 1st and 2nd movements are ready, it may well have changed a bit. The opening (theme) does make a return in the cadenza, but not anywhere else, I did try to find a place to shoe horn it in, but that´s exactly what it sounded like, so I took it out.
It's hard for me to be objective I think, I've heard it thousands of times and I know all of the melodies and I have them running round in my head so to me, I do hum the tunes and see how it hangs together, but perhaps a first time listener would be hard pressed to pick out a good tune.
My main reason for posting a piece at this stage is to get comments like your, that let me see it from a different perspective, and to adapt what I have if I think those comments are valid. Rest assured that I do value you response and I will keep it in mind as I'm tinkering LOL.
Thanks again
Kind regards
Mark