I wanted to dedicate a piece to a loved one, so I composed a waltz in piano. Then I met with an orchestra composer to help me orchestrate it. Please, I would love feedback from this community. It is full of people who can give me their PoV and tell me for example "Trumpets louder would sound better in this part; or make this section softer".
It is composed of 4 waltzes. The pattern is: 1) D Major; 2) G Major; 3) D Major; 4) G Major; Coda) D Major
Thank you so much!
Excellent Bourree. No comments about the work itself. Nice pace and length, and a tune that borders on the period when the bourree was popular. A minor key isn't uncommon for this dance and you've managed the harmony impeccably as minor harmony can sometimes get difficult.
Well, done.
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Thanks for the comment, yes its a simple piece I wrote it in 2 hours or something. Just quickly practising, I dont really had an idea when composing it, I just thought this sounded pretty cool lol. Maybe later when I have time I could orchestrate it!
Well - it ends on a pretty solid C so it must be in C right? LoL Nice use of extended chords that resolve their tensions. Also with some pleasant appoggiaturas in the beginning. Maybe you set out to compose something you could play easily but I really miss some fioraturas/roulades that could lend this piece an added factor of creepy-ness (at least I think that's the kind of mood you were going for in this). Some great moments in this where tonality shines through amidst a dissonance-riddled angst. Seems like this would be a great piece to orchestrate. Thanks for sharing!
I tried combining Hans Zimmer's style with Sawano Hiroyuki's for this one.
The theme surrounds itself around battling an Efreet (or Ifrit), i.e. an evil spirit.
This is, for now, still a work in progress I'm stuck on unfortunately. But please let me know what you guys think of it :)
EDIT:
It's finished!