Still not sure about the ending (I know it abruptly ends, as most of my music tends to do - almost like it is leading into another emotion rather than carrying through a story, so I may work on another part of this at a later date to 'complete' the story...not sure yet of what I might do - or if I might just move on - which is why I am posting this in a finished capacity for now.)
I am still learning the basics here, but I am learning non-the-less, due to the tremendous help of feedback, critique, and criticism I receive. I appreciate any feedback as I seek to not only just continue to make more music, but also to improve.
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