Wow, this is a really cool piece, the rhythm works so well with the harmony. I cannot judge the octatonic nature of it, but surely it sounds great. The 11/8 tempo works really well. I'm just wondering whether it would make sense to play a little more with the 2/8 rhythm at the end of each measure, possibly moving it around to different spots of the measure? Or would it be confusing? (I don't mean for your piece in particular, it is very nice as it is; I was wondering in general). Thank you!