Hi @malumCompositor !
Well, thanks for your first sentence : that's the main point !
About the lack of structure : yeah, it may be so, I'm getting more concerned, step by step, with introducing more structure in my orchestral works, taming the original inner flow. I don't see any non-intentional harmonic clash in my piece.
Also, the violin arpeggios you point out at 3'40 don't seem confusing to me, they are just background ornamentation ; I had more interrogations about the part at 2'15 in the third movement...
Thanks for reviewing π