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  1. li uhl di-y I done gone made
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  2. Hello, Fuge a3 in c minor written for organ. North german style. Please tell me what you think.
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  3. I love those strings at the beginning. Which harp VST did you use? I own the Elysium harp and it does not sound as 'rich' as the one you are using.
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  4. Sounds good. The intro kind of reminds me of Final Fantasy or Zelda.
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  5. Dan! Great rhythmic mastery! Sounds as complete as the day is short. Consider, a larger ensemble, and plugging it in a symphony!
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  6. Nice work.... It has the essence of counterpoint with some modern gestures. I like it.
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  7. Disclaimer: I haven't listened to the other movements, but I will in time. I echo what @malumCompositorsaid about a lack of structure. You have some good ideas here and there, but they seem to be severely disjointed. Try to not to cram everything at once. I did like the motivic figure and its subsequent development from measures 9-16. There are also a lot of questionable harmonic/melodic choices...For starters, the key signature at the beginning is in C minor, but the material is in G major...and it mostly stays in the G major/minor-ish tonality the rest of the piece. There are odd harmonic progressions (the last few measures of the movement for example), harmonic clashes (flute/oboe around 97, B natural in bassoon at 96)....even if intentional, sound very odd. Your string writing is alright. Wind writing on the other hand needs more polish. Overall, a little orchestration studying might be helpful, just to get a general idea of the capabilities for each instrument.
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  8. Hello, Short three voiced fugue for organ manualiter. North german style. SimenN
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