I can't win with this site. I replied then tried to quote a comment and it blanked out my reply.
Well, never mind. Let's try again.
I was going to ask you please to excuse me not giving individual replies as that would just push the replies count up.
Thank you for listening and these most encouraging comments. All gratefully received.
Seems there's consensus that the ending is too abrupt. I thought it was ok but I stand corrected and will look at what I can do. The original was more brief, just a couple of pizzicati in C# minor.
Coxi, I couldn't detect an acceleration where you point out. I marked the score "slow down" without showing the tempo marks from the daw. Although they may be difficult to see, there's a picture at the bottom showing this and true to form the music seems to slow. However it's perceptions that count so thanks for pointing that out.
PeterthePaperComposer, mea culpa! There was a horn in the earliest sketch but I abandoned it. That was a mistake up there. The rendering definitely doesn't include one. Listening now, it's possible the Bass Clarinet note in Bar 5 'C' or the Alto Flute Bar 39, note 'B natl' sounds 'horn-like'. It's possible with certain notes on certain instruments. Not a question of being caught off-guard, it's just how it is. There are similarities between oboe and trumpet: in certain parts of their mid-range they share a similar 'formant' of harmonics.
Anyway, thanks for drawing attention to it. Interesting.
So....MJFOBOE, David_DLM Many thanks also, taking your time to comment.
Should anyone be interested, here's a) the rall from 110 to 88 (bar nos. on score one less than daw. b) the original ending (7 seconds).