Nice job! The change to the "Avian Waltz" movement was a welcome one and gave the piece an optimistic ending although in terms of balancing the lengths of the respective movements I thought the 2nd movement was much too short. Also the harp arpeggios throughout are kind of a cheap way of giving your piece motion. Makes it sound more like a video-game track rather than a symphonic movement. You could have used the harp more sparingly, for example using it only in the first half of each measure or only ascending or descending with it but not both. Also, it would be great to look at a score of this to make sure that the harp would be able to manage the chromatic changes you have (among other things that the score would help people hear). I love the repeating wind notes in the Avian Waltz - really characterizes the birds imo. Thanks for sharing and well done overall!