I'm very grateful for the criticism. I really apologize for the lack of dynamics, my plugin made changing them tedious, so perhaps I should get some better software. You are also right in saying that I need to figure out a way to stop all of the voices from blending into an auditory soup. I'm also quite flattered by You calling my theme beautiful, and the composition theoretically acceptable. As for the sheet music, I wrote this piece in piano roll, so in theory I could transcribe it to sheet music, but I imagine it would take me yet another month to do that. Maybe next time I will use staff notation instead, although I find it less convenient. Anyway, thanks a lot for the comment, I'm quite glad that You enjoyed this piece.