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I am currently working on a new piano sonata. I just completed the first movement, and I would be very grateful for your comments

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Hello Henry, Thank you very much for your comments. In fact, I am often inspired by the music of Schubert, as in the case of this piece. It is true that there are a number of different episodes and I often like to write my pieces in this way- I did not have a plan for a defined underlying structure. It sort of developed organically by itself. The difficult thing is always to avoid (what shall I call it) an ”out of place” musical progression between the sections. It is difficult to describe this, but you will understand what I mean. There will be two more movements. I have not made a final decision about them, but for the second movement, my thoughts are going in the direction of a theme with variations, and the third movement (as a contrast to the first movement) will probably be a (molto) allegro, also based on a particular theme. It will take me quite some time to pull everything together, but I will post it in due time. Thanks a lot Peter for your constructive comments. Immediately, I must respond to your comment about the meter. How could I have overlooked this! You are right, it should be ¾, and I will change it and upload the corrected score. In fact, in several places ( after ms 171) my notations are already in line with ¾, but somehow, I forgot to make an adjustment. Unfortunately, this is not a real performance. It would be much better, but unfortunately I would not be able to do this anymore after a hand injury and a loss of dexterity. Hello hw1234 Thank you for you feedback! My earlier sonatas are also uploaded. You can hear them if you go to my profile and click on “my compositions”, where you will find them