Nice job! Your brand of harmonically rich and filled out orchestrations really shines in this. I thought that this mp3 was recorded a bit too quiet on my end for some reason. I think you have a cool ambiguous harmony at the end when the cello ends on the E natural. I actually expected the E to slide down to an Eb creating an Ab major chord. Instead of that you took the Ab and slid that down to a G to create a C major chord. You also could have slid the C down to a B to make an E major chord of course LoL. Thanks for sharing this piece - I know you had your reservations about sharing a piece which was technically not yet done. It's too bad you couldn't participate in the competition on time because of your ear troubles.