I've just listened to the third movement. I love this movement more than the first two! For me the overall atmosphere, theme and structure are more uniform here. I feel there are more emotions in it. I like how you transform that opening theme in different keys. Subjectively for me the theme can be transformed and developed with more varied treatment, since I find the theme changes mostly in the key. I don't know much of the biblical story, but I guess during those 3 days there were different types of things happening, instead of the same searching in 3 days. I think you can just add more different variation of the main theme to it like a variation movement or even Wagner's use of leitmotives here, as it can signify the change but still cohere the whole movement! The ending is quite unexpected for me, as I think the key change quite abrupt. I see that you want to link this with the latter movement which is in D minor, but I think the ending D major here can be prepared with more time and last a bit longer to achieve the effect!
Thanks for sharing!
Henry