Same theme and similar rhythm, but a completely different context! Very modern sounding and I love your opening. Almost sounds a little like Secret of Mana (not sure if you know that game, its from the SNES days). But it reminds me a lot of the overworld music from that game. But interestingly enough I just got recommended by a friend to listen to Sibelius' Violin Concerto, and wow, the beat is very similar. I know you are going for the Harvest Moon beat, but I think you slightly change it up a little, and it sounds more like Sibelius now haha!
I don't have any recommendations musically, it's a very good rendition. But in terms of your dynamics, I felt like the strings "release" were getting cut off by their attack. The strings just felt a bit too sharp and unnatural at times, but it could have been an issue with recording.