Thank you once again Henry. You are probably right with the D thing. It was my first instinct but then for some reason I thought I needed to divirge a little but possibly I don't. I'm going to listen to both versions and see who I feel.
The only thing I've done to Berria is to slow it a little more and delay it's entrance. I'm happy with it musically I think, it just needs a little more finesse in some small areas but essencially will remain the same.
Regards
Mark
I hope I won't need that much time for a piece in the future anymore 🤮!
If you really wanna know Sonata form thoroughly, Darcy and Hepokoski's Elements of Sonata Theory will be a real extensive read for it, with Hepokoski's Sonata Theory Handbook as supplementary book to it.
Henry