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Greetings. It has been a while since I posted something on this forum. I didn't get to review compositions by other members lately due to being busy with my studies, and I'm sorry for that. Anyway, a few weeks ago, I decided to write a theme and variations for the piano. This was my first time writing music with this structure, but it was not because I lacked inspiration. I took it as an exercise to boost my creativity and improve my composition skills. This eight-minute-long piano piece, written in E-flat major, is one of my major works. It consists of a theme, five variations, and a short finale. These variations are based on a simple theme I created, which I finished within a few hours. On average, each section took me a day to complete. One difficulty I faced when writing this composition was to keep the material interesting while not being too distant from the theme. Here is the breakdown of the structure of this composition: Main theme (E-flat major, Maestoso, 6/8): It's an operatic yet simple theme, which opens forte and Maestoso. 1st variation (E-flat major, 6/8): This variation is a berceuse with grace-note embellishments in the melody and frequent hand-crossing. 2nd variation (E-flat major, Più mosso, 6/8): This playful variation features sixteenth-note figurations in the right-hand part. 3rd variation (A-flat major, Sostenuto, 6/8): This variation is a serenade and the slowest among the five variations. This variation ends with a long pause, marking the beginning of the fast section towards the finale. 4th variation (E-flat major, Vivace, 6/8): This variation is partly inspired by the third movement of Beethoven's fifth piano concerto. This fast section demands virtuosity and contains a short cadenza passage. 5th variation (E-flat major, 2/4): This variation is an étude featuring rapid triplets in the right-hand part. This section is the shortest among all variations, lasting under a minute. Finale (E-flat major, Presto, 6/8): The finale opens with tremolos and a horn-like passage restating the main theme, followed by a reprise of the fourth variation at a much quicker tempo, quickly concluding the piece. Let me know what you think about this piece. I hope you'll enjoy it! Carl Koh Wei Hao P.S. The audio was generated on MuseScore 2.3.2.

I agree with you on this. I may want to fix the notation in the future, but once it's played, the melody should be distinguishable. It just takes a little effort to recognize the theme from the sheet music. Maybe adding some accent marks would help. I agree - just something to help the performer identify different things. I thought about this before and had planned to include another slow variation in G-sharp minor. However, I did not write it eventually because I felt that five variations should be sufficient, given that each variation is more than a minute long on average. I tried to keep the length of this composition under ten minutes, or else it may become quite bland since the same idea is repeated throughout the piece, albeit with different textures and characters. Thank you for your time reviewing my work! I also agree with this - maybe the theme presented in Eb minor would've been cool, or C minor. But I also understand the time limit. But in the future adding a section in a different key would add some interest to the piece - maybe in a variation right before the finale.

Wow, I listen to Honegger's piece for the first time and indeed it's very peaceful. Such a wonderful piece and thx your sharing @Quinn !! He really did find peace not just through the Alps but in his heart at that moment. Henry