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Hello everyone, and nice to meet you! My name is Arti, I'm from Cyprus. I'd like to share a small composition with you called 'Le Parisien,' which I wrote last year. I hope you'll enjoy it 🙂 whoisarti - Le Parisien

I think it sounds really good. Up until 50 seconds in, I feel it's perfection. At the 50 second mark and beyond, I think it starts to get a perhaps a little too slow paced. I know you are trying to build tension and that the piece isn't finished yet, but maybe if you trim that section in half (where the violin repeats a section to finish off with a cadence), it would improve the flow of your piece. But really good job so far, I can't believe this is your first classical piece.

Hello @whoisarti, Welcome to the forum! First of all, I don’t why you have just too few subscribers given the quality of your videos! The views is high but it’s highly un-proportional with the subscriber no! I love the timbre of this piece! The clarinet combines very beautifully with those plucked string instruments! And the accordion which our Daniel @Omicronrg9 may admire! And the celesta passage! Whole piece is full of instrumental wonder. Combined with that C minor blue mood it’s SO great! The ending is perfect too! Thx for joining us! Your joining will be a great addition to our forum! Henry

Hi @Gabriel Carlisle, The waltz is quite funny to listen to. What will be the number of performers for each instruments? If it!s just one for each instrument, the clarinet won’t be able to play more than a note at a time! If it’s for two clarinettists you should write I and II next to the notes to indicate which note will be played by which one. For the E harmonic spelling, the Eb should be D sharp in b.11, 23 and 33-40. The trill of the flute should be written with just one long B in b.33-36. Thx for sharing! Henry

Hi Arti, and welcome to our community. The way you implement your instruments is absolutely beautiful. I can hear every instrument with clarity and purpose. This is a well written and beautifully articulated composition. I will also subscribe to your channel, your music is wonderful.

Dude you're amazing I went to your YT and listened to a bunch of stuff. I loved Toska, you've got some great talent. Welcome!