Hi @Gabriel Carlisle,
I think the Eb minor is well chosen for the intense mood with those beats beaten, but I think the brasses can be louder at the beginning. And I don’t know, maybe you can add more harmonic progressions rather than keeping the basic harmonic pattern throughout the whole track! Also I think the dynamic level can vary more and it should have some fortissimo moment! Now I feel like a little bit bored since the dynamic and harmony don’t change much even the voices are invited. I think @olivercomposer’s soundtracks are really great at depicting those epic scenes with great intensity of dynamic level and brass usage and you can check out his pieces!
Henry