Yo Peter,
I really love this variation! Before 0:33 your manipulating of Brahms’s original melody is amazing when you use some Stravinskian chopping juxtaposition method to chop up and extend the melody with great effect. The first three notes become motive like, the notes after become syncopated. And then the D E F phrase such a great use of harp and glissandos throughout the strings and woodwinds to add some mysteries in it. The next phrase you push those mysterious power to climax and then suddenly you leave a purified version of the 2nd sentence of the original melody! The glockenspiel is so beautiful here as well as in the whole piece, and combining the piccolo here is so like purified crystal. I am sure the baby can be consoled here after the first half of suspension haha.
I think it’s very clear here, but less clear in the original version, probably just because of the timbre of clavichord making it less clear?
Although you are the paper composer, I have to say that @gaspard’s handwritten score is so beautiful which makes yours messy muahahahaha! Though of course it’s much better than my Beethovanian handwriting haha!!
Thx for sharing!
Henry