Hey @Louis dB,
It’s interesting the notes without a slur here is played in legato, since ores without slurs will be assumed as non-legato! I love the energy of the piece. The F natural in b.31 to 37 should be E sharp and the C natural in b.38 and 39 should be B sharp. The B flat in b. 37 to 40 should be A sharp. The interaction of the violins is quite nice, maybe you can give the viola and cello shine more next time instead of doing all the stunt works! Thx for sharing.
Henry