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Hello dear young composers. Here is a little music inspired by some photos, which I took in Rouen, a city in Normandy where I often work at the opera, in the choirs.Sometimes the books are demanding to memorise, where they require a lot of presence on the set, sometimes less and leave me free time, as is the case at the moment. I always take the opportunity to explore the lost corners, camera on my shoulder. So I wanted to put some musical notes on these views, with a theme related to decay, abandonment, which is something that interests me a lot in photography because I find it aesthetic. It is therefore close to a musical theme that I had called Scarescrow, even if here, we lean more into the melancholic side than into terror. Thank you for listening anyway!

Hey everyone! Just finished composing a piece inspired by the Titanomachy saga called 'The Fall of Chronos'. It's an epic symphony featuring a women's choir. I hope you'll like it. What's your opinion?

I'm pretty new to all of this, mostly having fun with composition while I apply to medical school. This is the first big piece I tried to write, some errors here and there with some questionable passages, but I'm overall happy with it. Very open to criticism as I hope to improve this piece and others I hope to write as a way to ward off application anxiety. Main idea of the piece: it's about the death of Henry II of France at his daughter's wedding. The beginning is meant to be a little chaotic but joyous because it represents the many people of France, both of high and low standings, gathering for this momentous occasion (imagine flying over the castle and seeing the many people walking around, preparing things). The softer part afterward is meant to represent the princess as she readies herself for the festivities, including the jousting. Bell tolls signify the beginning of the joust, with everyone being summoned to watch the event. Once things become faster, imagine the knights galloping at each other, lances ready to unsaddle their opponent. The King is one of these knights, excited to take part in a sport he loves. The tension builds as the joust becomes quite dangerous, until the unthinkable happens and the King is launched off his horse, a part of his lance protruding from his visor. The uneasiness and sadness that follows portrays the people as they become worried about not only the King's health (as he will soon perish), but also the fate of France as the King's young son will claim the throne without any experience and proper guidance.

Hi @olivercomposer, I really love the opening choral passage! It’s so fateful in C minor and occasional Ab minor. The instrumental development after it is quite epic which features your favourite brass instruments usage! I feel like the instrumental passage is rather too long. What I expect is the opening chorus to return earlier, since the modulation to G minor is rather less exciting when similar passages keep continuing. But I really love the ending choral passage!! So epic here! Thx for sharing! Henry

Hey Jean @Krisp, I always look forward to your post here and in your YT channel! I have left a brief comment on YT and now I should be more detailed here. I love the opening dissonance or bitonality very much! The sudden modulation from A minor to Eb minor is really surprising yet very moody. The next phrase would be in my favourite C# minor and for me it’s nostalgic here. another tritone modulation here to g minor! I love the murmuring here! Then the opening mood returns unexpectedly like a memory with the higher register of the piano. The higher register of the melody here gives a nostalgic feeling and reinterpretation of the distant memory. It’s amazing that you promote an abandoned mood so enriched with different colours in just 3.5 minutes. It sounds like much longer given how rich the content is. Thx for sharing! Henry

Wow, this is great! I love some of the tactile things I can hear with your samples. The wood echo of the strings pizz, or I could hear the breathiness for some of the subtle wind moments. A hobbyist composer/aspiring medical professional? Very cool, and welcome! You do some pretty eargasmic things in your music lol. Was that wind harmonics in the background at the part around 5:40? The part at 4:00 was really to my liking too, I love the bass/cello low suspenseful line. The winds at 5:00 remind me of the scherzo in Beethoven's 9th 😄 The ending section was very beautiful, and capped this off nicely. This was a bit "heavier" in sound, which I think you flirted with the line of being too much. Nice job with that. It seemed to have a good balance with orchestral colors, and you didn't hold back with the wide range the orchestra offers (church bells, percussive stuff I couldn't quite make out, etc.). One thing to think about is your melodies and motifs. To me, as impressive as your piece sounds, it could've benefitted with stronger themes for the listener to latch on to. About halfway through listening, I read your description of the music, and I like that you used a story for the form, but attaching motifs to characters or plot points would be something to delve into deeper next time. Maybe it's there and I just didn't catch it, but that's kinda the point. I'm a guitarist, and with heavy distortion and high gain, I can mask a lot of "mistakes" or cookie cutter patterns in my leads. I can hide behind the "sound". I kind of hear something similar with this piece. There are lots of cool sounds and effects you create, and your samples really get to flourish in this. But, I'm just saying don't let that be your heavy distortion. I listened to this 3 times, and after every listen, I liked it even more. 🙂 Kudos to a fine work, and good luck with the med stuff. Involve yourself in the community as well! People would love to hear your thoughts on their music. Thanks for sharing!