Man, I really hate to hear this. Sorry, but to me this SOUNDED like you worked on it for only an hour. I like you, and I like your style, but I wish you would take the time to consider that this is a great idea, but it doesn't seem like a completed work. It sounds like an improvisation, and you added other instruments when you heard the playback and thought it would sound good, and it does, and I like it... but it just feels cheap in a way. Yeah you have cool ideas, but I'd hate to see you fall into the trap of showing your music off when it's only a sketch of what it could be.
I don't want to sound harsh or anything, but I guess it's just a trigger when I hear someone's music and they like to mention the quick time it took for them to write it. It's a good start, but are there any plans to elaborate on it?
You mentioned your new job, and to be fair, I used to work bullshit jobs, and music was my only reprieve. I get it. I guess I'm just challenging you in a way?
Idk, like I said, I dig your style. I just prefer when someone tells me, "after months of blood sweat and tears, I figured out how to finish this beautiful work of art I've been brewing".
Looking forward to future music from you 🙂