Dear forum... here's the third movement of my piano trio. I've been working concurrently to the second movement (which I want to be a scherzo - Eb? -, lighthearted, having still confused ideas about the middle section). The second movement did not want to come out of the hat, so I worked on the third instead. Hoping to get your always precious feedback. The structure is perhaps a bit odd:
[g minor]
b. 1-11 A
b. 12-21 B
b. 22-40 A' expanding A going through b flat minor then back to g with inganno
b. 41-51 B' modulating to c minor
b. 51-65 transition to B flat major
b. 65-83 C middle section in B flat
b. 83-88 retransition to g minor
b. 88-140 A-B-A'-B'' with B'' staying in g minor
b. 140-152 coda
My biggest qualms are with section B', I think the modulation is a bit weird. The theme of C I like, but the different bits could be better stitched together rather than having pauses. the retransition to g minor I like but perhaps it would be more effective adding a couple more chords before the dominant D? The transition to the coda could be less abrupt? a few chords longer?
Any reaction suggestion recommendation correction evaluation words of encouragement or gentle hints to just drop it all very welcome!
Enjoy the summer!
triopf andante.mp3