Hello @Frank Normandy
I like the expressive part with the chords, though, as I have already said while reviewing other of your works, it would benefit from a more agitated figuration and pedal. But if the focus was on expressiveness. It is a good way to go. The usage of the minor four chord in a major key (which I think you have used, but I might be wrong) is really expressive, I recommend using it (for future compositions) with or replacing it with the half diminished second degree, as they are vey similar, jut with an added note
Thanks for sharing
Manuel
PS why the “Salamander” in the title of the audio?