Hello @Alex Weidmann. This piece evoques in me a feeling of internal void and melancholy, like a reflection on a past time.
I think the various repetitions of the main theme at the beginning could get monotonous for the listener. Perhaps varying or thickening the piano accompaniment could help, and there should not be a problem with the difficulty, since the middle section is already much harder. Or maybe twisting the melody could work as well.
There could have been more motivical connectivity, and it would have been nice to implement some motifs or themes (even if they are extremely distorsioned) in the middle section, because it is very different, and if it lacks of thematical connectivity it feels like it could have been a different piece on its own.
Some thoughts on this: The repeated notes in this context should be marked staccato (if they were faster there would be no need to, and the same if they were slower, but at this speed, I think they should). I think a “poco meno mosso” marking would be useful to not make it overly virtuosic. Another alternative is to vary the right hand so most repeated notes can be struck one with the left and the other one with the right. I don’t think maintaining this technique for a longer period of time so the section can properly develop would be a problem, since it is not an exhausting lisztian type of virtuosity.
My favourite part is the part just before the middle section with the trills. Very evocative
Thanks for sharing
Manuel