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I wonderful piece overall. The progressions, formal logic and conception are sound and convincing. My one objection would be to some of the figurations for the right hand---rhythmically jarring perhaps beyond what is necessary or congruent with the work as a whole.
Also, while I get the music box-like simplicity of the right hand playing single notes, I wonder if the piece wouldn't really POP if you introduced more harmonic depth/counterharmony in the right hand at places of elevated drama/emotional importance?
I must say, there are so many small, thoughtful harmonic/melodic twists that really MAKE this piece--particularly endings of phrases and transitions. Clearly influenced by Chopin's take on Field's noctures.
Very nice, and thank you for posting.
PS: love the piano sample.