Hi @Aw Ke Shen,
Again as a late reviewer (and copycat) I agree with everything @PeterthePapercomPoser and @Awsumerguysaid. The melody in the first section is not interesting enough as in Rach's G minor Prelude.
I love your care on both the transition to the middle section and returning to the C minor March.
that can be remembered
Don't be too worry on that, I literally borrowed and stole from Beethoven in all of my early "works" (and still so!).
Thx for sharing!
Henry